sure would love to what is Via?

Well, it basicly the story of how Conscio was raised in the forest by his mother and grandfather as a puppy.
Then he was taken by a warlock named Buck. He is the Ring Master of the Dark Carnival; yes a clown. Umm, anyway, after he learns how to use his powers, he escapes Buck and Judd; the human he stayed with who abused him with a chain during the cany times. And his mother finds him, only he dosn't remember her. So Magnacolodi and Aniu have to reraise him. Then he meets Raven; the angel. And Buck comes for his revenge. And he has to defeat him.

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"Angels banished from the heavens are forced to become devils" (Vicious)

Wow you layed out the whole thing in just a couple lines great sounds cool

Thanx!

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"Angels banished from the heavens are forced to become devils" (Vicious)

your welcome

, oh speaking of which I've posted it(As u can see) do you think you could proof read it for me?

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"Angels banished from the heavens are forced to become devils" (Vicious)

Very nice I;m not the best on writing but it had a nice flow and it all sounded find to me I hope all who read it are kind. good luck

Thanx!

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"Angels banished from the heavens are forced to become devils" (Vicious)

your welcome so you want to be a writer ?